Thank you everyone for your interest in my haiku. At the time of writing I did feel that the last line could be controversial - maybe a truth, maybe an overly romanticised way of seeing things...., in truth probably neither of those two extremes, nor both of them, not even a little of each.... probably just the whimsical musings of a man with time on his hands.
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Things that are crucial sometimes slip by my students, because they're too enamored of their phones. Ah, me!
This is such a wise truth Derek. We all need to remember these gems...
Well chosen words. , , yes, that's it!
'Some old men' ~ You seem to be one of the 'enlightened' ones ~ well done ~
Happy Weekend to you,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Indeed, old men do know the truth! Well written! Have a grand weekend!!
So much to learn. Sadly there are still some old timers that could learn a few things too. :-)
thank you derek for this thoughtful filled with hope haiku.
i wish all old men knew this truth.
Ah yes let us hold fast to that treasure
Happy Sunday Derek
much love...
Thank you everyone for your interest in my haiku.
At the time of writing I did feel that the last line could be controversial - maybe a truth, maybe an overly romanticised way of seeing things...., in truth probably neither of those two extremes, nor both of them, not even a little of each.... probably just the whimsical musings of a man with time on his hands.
Have a great week everyone.
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